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Friday, August 6, 2010

A Poem: The Fall of Almet

This poem was an experiment. I haven't really written any poem like this in the past, so I would really like feedback. If you would just leave a comment, it would be greatly appreciated. Tell me whether you liked it (or hated it), if you enjoyed it (or not), whether you think it was well written (or a disaster), or whatever crosses your mind.

The Fall of Almet

Eyes that glitter
Like emeralds
Solid determination
Like the rock beneath his feet

Glowing, cold steel
Gleaming in the darkness
A mighty blade
Lumen

He faces the creature
The monster of the deep
A minion of the darkness
Never before defeated

The bones
Of those who have come before
Cover the land
Too many to number

Almet
The Dead One
Raises his gruesome head
Facing the one who has come to challenge

"Why do you come, foolish one?"
A voice like death itself

"I have come to end terror, end darkness."

"Even once I am gone, the darkness will live on.
For as long as there is light, there will be dark.
It is the way of the world."

"Yes but mayhaps, the light will last that much longer.
Mayhaps the light will hold that much more sway."

Fire. Brimstone.
Darkness. Light.
Blood. Sweat.
Man. Monster.

The battle was long and great
Lasted many days
It snowed smoke
Hailed ash

Fangs locked with steel
Talons with bone

At long last
Lumen came down, striking the fatal blow
The beast was smote from the mountain
Crashing into the great lake

Almet sank through the waters
Never to rise again

The sun burst from behind the black clouds
The barren land was illuminated with its glow

The man gazed in satisfaction
In wonder

As the world bloomed into life once more

Thursday, August 5, 2010

A Poem: The Open Road

The Open Road was inspired on the drive from Minnesota to Billings, Montana. It's not one of my personal favorites that I've written, but it does what it does. Evidently it was written while in the Purple Van (one of my very favorite places to be), and while watching the sun set. America is a beautiful country, and driving across it is one of the best ways to see it first hand.


The Open Road

Soft rolling hills

Wide empty plains

The setting sun

Dosing the expanse

In gorgeous

Rich

Golden

Liquid topaz

The clouds above my head

Are vast floating islands

Of glittering snow

The trees here and there

Stand tall and strong

Dark sentinels that reach for the sky

The serenity encloses me

A protective cocoon that shields me

From the troubles and sorrows of this world

Those bombardments so hard to hold against

The sweet rhythm of the van lulls me

Into a feeling of welcome bliss and peace

Time simply to enjoy the quiet of my thoughts

The mind-blowing countryside

The soothing joy of reading, of writing

Letting the words fill me, flow through me

Bubbling up like a fountain and spilling over

Its music loud and clear

Creativity, imagination

Never were so easy

The open road

It holds no limits

Sunday, July 25, 2010

A Book Review: The Hunter's Moon, by O. R. Melling


I don't know what my luck is with libraries, but once again we returned to a library, and once again the computer said they were checked out of all of the books I wanted except one. Again, the one they reportedly had was missing. Needless to say, I was frustrated. It started to turn into a round of deja vu as I headed for the Young Adult fiction section. Searching for anything that looked good, I pulled out O. R. Melling's The Hunter's Moon. This is getting rather repetitive, but again I had low hopes, and again I was vastly surprised.


The Hunter's Moon had a fairly uninteresting plot that was both cheesy and cliche at parts. There were only a few characters. The general writing wasn't even that great. No, the thing that captured me about this book, was the descriptions of the beautiful Irish countryside, the luxurious land of Faerie, and what the characters were going through. The descriptions flow like Shakespeare, and are sweeter to the ear than poetry. The images Melling's words paint in your mind just transfix you to your seat and keep you turning the pages, searching for more. I'm not even going to bother saying anymore about the story, I'm going to go ahead and post some tastes of this delightful book.

"The order of things is ours to play with. We can create a sun and a moon. The heavens we can sprinkle with radiant stars of the night. Wine we can make from the cold waters of the Boyne, sheep from stones, and swine from fern. On the mortal plane, life is a web of illusion. We weave what we wish."

"I have seen a land where summer dwells, a faraway country. There stands a fair bright wood of branching oak, full of red sap, where sweet birds nest. At eventide cools the sun-steeped earth in a shower of dew, like dark drops of honey. Acorns fall from the trees and into a stream, foam-flecked and murmuring."

"Suddenly a dark form leaped over the bonfire, scattering the fairies with the shriek of a a hawk. Vivid colors gleamed on his body like metallic paint. His dark eyes were scrolled with kohl. His long black hair was sleek and glossy. In command of the clearing, he began to dance. It was a breathtaking display of grace and control. At first he stepped slowly, as if in a dream, then he switched to quick startling motions. The tilt of his head or the crook of his arm. Even his eyes flitted and flicked. And his fingers and toes. Each exquisite movement was an intensity of passion honed to perfection--the first shoot of a leaf, a bird breaking its shell, a dragonfly struggling to unveil its wings. In every part of his being , he was dance itself. On his brow glittered the sovereign star. Finvarra, the King, Lord of the Dance."

"His features were cool, his eyes aloof, but the voice was rich and dark like the night."

"To life we wake from the long-forgotten dream, the beautiful mystery. The taste of existence is a drop of honey on the tongue. So very young and so very old, we have gone to seed and run wild with the wind."

"Unto what is the journeying? What stitches the weave of the warp and the weft? What lies between the layers of every moment?"

"We need no words, Beloved. Our fates are entwined until the stars fall. It is for you I have taken this path and I do so without regret. Whether fairy or mortal, love is all."

"Seven were the days of Genesis. Seven are the pillars of life. Seven will be the fires of the Apocalypse. No better number can ride the storm. As a Company of Seven we will forge our destiny."

"They stepped out from the alcove, one human, one immortal, both clothed in night's black and arrayed with stars. As they walked arm-in-arm toward the assembly, the music and dancing ceased and the trumpets blared out."

"They sat tall in their chairs, like lords and ladies. The ghosts of old battles whispered from the tapestries. Camlann. Clontarf. The Fields of Culloden. The shadows of lost and noble causes. For better or worse, some wars had to be fought."

"They stood in a milky void, as if inside a cloud. Towering before them was a gigantic white gate. The railings shone of pale alabaster; the great fluted arch was inlaid with ivory. The portcullis, which had begun to rise, had the silvery sheen of mother-of-pearl."

"Whether it took seconds or aeons to cross that beautiful kingdom, they couldn't know. Time meant nothing in a land suspended between morning and night, for it held the breadth of infinity within its borders. And whether the countryside swept past them like wind, or they traveled themselves at impossible speeds, they couldn't be sure. For it seemed they were given hinds' feet as they leaped over mountains, vast plains, and boundless seas. Everything shone with a startling clarity of light, an eternal summer's day. For lo, the winter is past, the flowers appear on the earth, and the time of the singing of birds is come."

"Like the kraken from the deep, the Great Worm rose up with an eerie silence more dreadful than a scream. He was darker than the night itself. A thousand eyes glared from his body. Gargantuan and glittering, like a spray of cold stars, he appeared to have no head, no tail, no beginning or end. Crom Cruac, the Hunter."

"I lie curled on the branch of the Tree of Life that bears both Faerie and your world like golden apples. Two spheres, two moons that eclipse each other, one fantasy, one reality, balanced side by side. Humanity cannot exist without its dreams, but for any dream to exist there must be a sacrifice."

"Leaf and branch sighed above her. The trailing ivy on the trunk whispered in her ear. Bees hummed in the sunshine, murmuring their secret language in an effort to soothe her. All of nature inclined toward her, for they knew the Queen of Faerie had lost her king."

"It was twilight that brought the fairies. Dusk had fallen over the fields and hedgerows. The early glimmer of stars hailed the night. First came the music, quivering on the air, dim sounds so plaintive the heart ached to hear them."

Well, I know that's kind of overkill. That's a lot of quotes right there, but it's only the beginning of all the wonders of The Hunter's Moon. If you're into poetry and Shakespeare, and people who know how to use words to stitch amazing tapestries in your mind, then you should definitely read this book.

Wednesday, July 21, 2010

A Sonnet: Wedding Day

This last school year my English class had to write a series of sonnets. We were writing about the story of a guy's relationship with a girl. It just so happened that I drew the section of the series that was the guy addressing the girl on their wedding day. =P This sonnet is what I came up with. It might be my very favorite thing I've written just because it makes me smile so much every time I read it. I have to give some credit to my oldest brother Jordan, and my sister Karith, because they both sat through the writing of the whole thing with me, and helped inspire me here and there. The rhyme scheme was fairly difficult, it goes A-B-B-A - A-B-B-A - C-D-D-C - E-E. I think that's it anyways. Also, just for those who don't know, sonnets have ten syllables per line. I hope you enjoy it, as a gamer would say, it's pretty imba. =P

Wedding Day

I will love you until the day I die
Two kindred souls have never known such bliss
As when we both on the grass play tennis
Remember you are you and I am I

Everything concerning you makes me cry
With joy because you are so sweet to kiss
And your whole being exudes your kindness
I hope we never have to say goodbye

On this sweet wedding day we make our vows
We will have many babies I am sure
And our love will remain special and pure
We will also have a small herd of cows

So marry me let us get outta here
We have the world to see oh baby dear

Wednesday, July 14, 2010

A Poem: Into The Sky

So I rarely ever rhyme in my poems. I can only really think of three poems that I've written that have some rhyme in them. One was a sonnet I had to write for English class, another was a really junky sonnet that I attempted to write very, very fast (if you've attempted sonnets before you know they can't be written fast), and the last was a completely nonsensical poem that was just about craziness, so thus was very easy to make rhymes. Anyways, I was inspired a couple of days ago to attempt a rhyming poem that actually had some meaning, and rhymed well and was cohesive. The result was Into The Sky. Surprisingly, this is another personal favorite of mine. I don't know why my two most recent poems are some of my favorites, but they are. Maybe it's because I'm getting better at poetry? But that could just be hopeful wishing. Some irony is that I wrote each of these last two poems in about ten minutes, and then edited them slightly a few hours later. How are the two poems I spent the least amount of time on some of my best work and my favorites? I don't know, maybe it means that having inspiration behind you really, really helps out. I may also be biased about liking this one so much. I have this obsession, with the wish to fly. Not so much flying as in flying planes, more like just being able to take to the air anytime you want, by yourself, no hindrance, no support. Sometimes I sit, look at the sky, and simply dream about being airborne. One of the reasons I loved How to Train Your Dragon so much was that for some reason the scene where he's first flying made me really feel almost as if I was flying myself. Anyways, as I said in my last post, if I had one wish it would be that I could fly. Here's my humble attempt at rhyming poetry:

Into The Sky

The wind whistling in my ears
Tearing at my hair
Flying, soaring
It gives me no scare

Through the clouds
Across the sky
Around the world
Away I fly

Leave all the worries
Leave all the sadness
Take to the skies
Where there's no blandness

The bliss of escape
Get away for the day
Appreciate the beauty
There's quite the view of the bay

Feel the freedom
Clouds like pillows
Visit the scorching sun
Catch the wind as it billows

Away, away from trouble
Up, up into space
As far as we can go
Try to keep up the pace

Never have we gone so fast
And we won't stop till the day is past

Tuesday, July 6, 2010

A Poem: The Blood-Red Rose

This is a poem I wrote a couple of days ago. It's one of my favorites actually. I think I like it so much because of the imagery, and I've always had this thing for certain flowers, the rose being one of them. The Blood-Red Rose is in fact representative, it's not merely a pointless poem about flowers. I don't want to just ruin what it's about though, I hope between you and your imagination you can interpret it. After all, it should be really easy to realize what it represents. It's pretty much right out there.

The Blood-Red Rose

The rose
Blood-red
The blood-red rose
Perfectly created

So delicate
So beautiful
Can be crushed in an instant
A snap, and its life is snuffed out

Its fragrance
Sweet and enticing
Holds so many dreams
So many passions

Yet so quickly it fades
How long
How long
Will it adorn the field?

It attempts to hold off its inevitable fate
It grasps at life
Its petals reaching for sun
Its roots for water

It wants life
They all do
How much can it get?
How much will it suck up?

Before its short life is over
Here a second
Gone the next
It's the blood-red rose

Tuesday, June 22, 2010

A Poem: What is Love?

Yet another poem I entered into the free category of the Whitman poetry contest. It's played off of what Gregg Speck said at the youth retreat about love being sacrifice. I think love is more than just sacrifice, but I think it is true that love is definitely a good part sacrifice, or at least shown by sacrifice. As I just read through this again I realize that the seventeenth line can be misunderstood. I did not intend for it to come across that I was saying to give up, as in accepting defeat, is love. What I mean is that giving up something, for somebody else, is love.

What is Love?

What is love?

Is love butterflies in my stomach?
Is love wanting to be in someone's presence?

Is love shown
By the pain I feel
When someone chooses to spend time
With another, and not me?

Is love the joy someone brings me?
Is love appreciation for a person?

Is love the desire
To touch someone?

No

I do not think
Love is any of these things

Love is not want
Love is not this happy feeling

Love is giving up

Love is giving with all your heart

If you desire something
But your friend does too
Make a gift of it

That is love

Love is sacrifice

Tuesday, June 15, 2010

A Poem: Worth Dying For

This poem won second overall in the Whitman poetry contest for the free category. I got the idea for this poem while listening to a song. Just to clear things up, the main point of this poem is that some things are worth fighting for, but not everything is worth dying for. The point of this poem is not to be strongly anti-military. I am anti-war, I do not think war is a good thing in any way. I do believe that a military is necessary, but just for defense. I apologize for the poem being so spread out so it takes up so much space. Something weird happened with the formatting and it somehow became double spaced.

Worth Dying For

Lots of things are worth fighting for

Very few things are worth dying for

Do you know the difference?


The people are riled up

Words set them on fire

Their blood boils

They would go to hell and back

Just for your stupid cause

Because your words stir them up


What ho grab your guns!

What ho draw your swords!

What ho we’re off to war!


Did he even feel

The tug of his son

Trying to pull him back

Begging him not to go?

Did he even hear

His wife asking him, to think of the family?

Or did he feel his daughter’s kisses

As she asked him when he’d be back?


He turns his back

His mind induced with “glorious” causes

He doesn’t think of the life

He could have had


He could have seen his son grow tall

He could have grown old with his wife

He could have seen his daughter wed



But no

He follows a man into war

Too caught up in the persuasive speeches

He marches to his death


Oh war

Oh violence

The lives you end

The families you rip apart

The heartbreak you cause

The unnecessary lives lost


Some things


Are just not

Worth


Dying for


What


Ho


Sunday, June 13, 2010

A Poem: Korea Sparkling

This is just a quick poem I whipped up after my short stay in Korea. It's just a bunch of things that I noticed that are pretty unique to Korea. I pretty much completely recommend Korea as a sweet place to visit, and I can safely say it is one of my five very favorite countries I've been too. I'll probably write a full length normal post about Korea in the days to come, so without further ado:

Korea Sparkling

Korea Sparkling
That is the motto
Of the wee Asian country
That holds so much wonder

Original
Amazing food

Thick-rimmed
Funky glasses

Shiny shoes
Huge and bright

Crazy hair
In so many designs

Shiny jewelry
All around

They maintain tradition
While sprinting towards the future

Utmost respect
Is lathered on the old
In the form of bows
And works of service

The youth are encouraged
To cling to their fashions
To be themselves
To be modern

They would kill themselves
For their honor
Their national pride
Means more than their life

Don't come
Between them and their Kim-chi
Or you'll find yourself
A foul way out

Korea
Korea
United they can conquer all
Who are they?

They are Korea Sparkling

Monday, May 31, 2010

A Poem: The Light

I've been really busy with end of school exams, parties, graduations and also packing to get ready to travel to Korea to visit my brother and sister-in-law. The result of all this is that I haven't been able to post anything recently. So here's a quick poem that I'll throw up before I go. This poem got third place in the Whitman Academy poetry contest for the devotional category. The Light is about how we need Jesus, we need to depend on him, we need to realize he's there, and we need to ask him for his help.

The Light

I trudge through the darkness
It weighs down on me
Burdens me
It is oppressive
It suffocates me
Wearies me
The ground beneath my feet is treacherous
I struggle to keep a footing
But the land is not firm
It gives no support
I try to fight off this shroud
This blackness
My strength is not great enough
To defeat this darkness
This evil
On its own
I am overpowered
I fall
A call for help ripping from my lungs
But am caught
By light
Golden
Pure
Amazing light
And suddenly
I'm surrounded
Given a shield
From this terrible, disgusting evil
I am strengthened
Invigorated
Most importantly of all
I am given hope
I scramble to my feet
Yelling a challenge
With this light on my side
No evil power is a match
I will make it through this hell
I know I will
I walk on
Easier, faster than before
Soon I notice
The light is receding
The darkness is encroaching
Burdening me once again
I despair as the last bit of light
Simply vanishes
I fall once more
I choke, I drown
Oh light, where have you gone?
And it is there again
Saving me once again
And I realize
It never left me to begin with
It has been there all along
I just need to accept it
Want it
Trust it
Lean completely on it
To acknowledge I will never be able to conquer anything without it
I need the light

© 2010 by Nathaniel Magnuson

Saturday, May 22, 2010

A Poem: Where Jesus Walked

This is another poem I entered into the devotional category of the Whitman poetry contest. This poem also did not place in the contest, but I still like it a good bit. The idea for this poem came to me while I was on vacation in Israel this spring. Just like the poem starts out, the idea for this poem struck me while I was standing on the eastern shore of the sea of Galilee while the sun was setting. The poem is about how it would have been great to be alive during the time of Jesus, but the fact is that we weren't. We have to continue to live on faith alone, and we must go out and change the world one step at a time, just as he commanded us to.

Where Jesus Walked

I stand on the eastern shore
Of the sea of Galilee
The Golan Heights
Rise to the sky behind me
In the west the sun slowly sinks beneath the mountains
It sprays its glory across the water
The town of Tiberius sprawls beneath the sun
Away in the distance to the North
Can be seen the formidable outline of Mt. Herman

I breathe deeply
The wind lashes my face
The Holy Land
That is what they call it
The place where Jesus walked

A tremor rakes my body
As I realize
I'm in the very land
Where our faith began
Christ's story fills the air
It takes very little thought
To imagine him here
Walking this shore
With his disciples in tow
To see him in front of my eyes
Teaching the crowds
How great it would have been
Just to see him
To hear him
In person

Alas he conquered death
Long before my time
And now we must run
On faith alone
But if feels so great
To walk where he once tread
To see where he once broke bread

As the sun disappears
Beneath the edge of the horizon
I turn on my heel and walk away

Tim to change the world

One step

One broken piece of bread

At a time


© 2010 by Nathaniel Magnuson

Wednesday, May 19, 2010

A Poem: A Man on a Mission

This is a poem I entered into the free category in the Whitman poetry contest. It's not one of my favorites, and it wasn't one of the judge's either, it didn't place. This spring I've been struggling with a lot of frustration because I haven't been getting recognition for several things I thought I deserved the right to have recognition for. I vented this frustration into this poem, which actually isn't my first poem on this topic. The result of venting this emotion into this poem is that it isn't that great, but at least it has some feeling in it.

A Man on a Mission

Frustration

It twists me
Bends me
It crumples me up
Like a weak piece of paper
That is chucked in the trash

You refuse to acknowledge me
Yet I've proved myself
So very many times
Just give me another chance
I'll do it again
And again
As long as it takes
To make you see me

I will not give up
Will not accept being overlooked
Will not accept this denial
I do have what it takes

I've shown you it's true
But your eye has a blind spot
When it is turned my way

I won't be treated like dirt
I won't be stepped over and trod on

You better watch out
For I'm coming your way
I'm volatile, explosive
If you get in my way
I'll erupt
Like a volcano
Busting its cap

I'm out to prove myself
No matter what it takes
God help you
If you get in my way
I'm a man on a mission
I'm on my way
I only want one thing

To prove myself

© 2010 by Nathaniel Magnuson

Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Haiku's From The Inexperienced...

Writing Haiku's is something I'm completely new at. I put my hand to it the other day, only to find out that this is one form of writing that I definitely need practice at. I've been really busy lately with end-of-the-year projects for school and the like, so at the moment I don't have time to post up any of my full length poems. Anyways, I thought it would be better to throw up the two Haiku's I wrote than to post nothing at all. I decided that since I had them on hand, to chuck them into the formal category in the poetry contest at Whitman, but of course neither of them placed, no surprise there. The first one is about how amazing a pillow is at night when you return from an exhausting day, the second one is about the beauty of flowers under the night sky.

Soft feather pillow
The very best friend at night
When so exhausted


Sweet flower petals
Falling beneath the bright stars
Such a sight to see

© 2010 by Nathaniel Magnuson

Sunday, May 16, 2010

A Poem: Can't Give Up

So this poem is one I wrote and entered into the poetry contest at Whitman. I put it in the Devotional category. It didn't place or anything, which didn't really surprise me, because this isn't one of my favorites and I don't think it's that good. It's about how even when God seems far away from us, we can't give up. We need to keep on trying, and keep on searching for him. The beginning starts off talking about how amazing he is, and how men could never compare to him. Anyways, here it is:

Can't Give Up

The flower petals
Float past my face
Their sweet scent
Tickles my nose

I inhale
Their fragrance
Blissful euphoria
Takes me in its hold

Amazing that the most simple
Of all God's creation
Can bring me more delight
Than all the grandeur of Man's

The smallest bug
More intricate
Than Man's
Greatest super computer

How is that
To tell you
That Man cannot compare
With God in the slightest?

Where is God now?
I cannot sense
His presence
I need it now

But he seems
So far away
Too distant
For me to reach

Is it time
To surrender?
I just want to lie down
And never get up

No
I can't give up
I will keep trying
To become more like him

It's hard
That's for sure
But with his help
And by his grace

If I try my hardest
I may succeed

© 2010 by Nathaniel Magnuson